Alright, first off:
Pretty decent, couldn't fit all the suggestions in over staples in the colors, but whatever, the list looks good.
Next off (making this short and sweet), General Suggestions, 2 per person.
(also as a note (as long as I continue to see other's lists being linked during card suggestion I'm putting this) This is a COMMUNITY built series, not a link my deck in the comments to get views and comments, there is the forums for that. Thanks)